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The wet wolf and more

Post  Packa Packa on Sun Sep 13, 2009 4:22 pm

There is actually a lot more, I am just going to post them later, okay?
EDIT: These are called 'pros'. They are sort of like poems but do not rhyme. Mine go a little fast, but whatever.

The wet wolf
My paws tread the sodden soil
Making the pads wet
The rain comes harder
piercing my fur
cold to the bone

Merciless Death
My sister is at my side
watching my breaths become shallow
she nudges me to my paws
only for me to fall again
Dead
"What has the cruel world done!?" She cries
tears welling up in her eyes.

Spinning Defeat
As the breeze ruffles my fur
I feel like my bones are shattered
the wind picks up
taking me off my paws
into a swirling defeat

The pain
My paws set precisely
to make a perfect escape
one wrong step
puts me in pain
the strong metal trap
keeps me in place
while sending waves of pain
throughout me.

The Hawk
As I lift my wings to fly
the world spins around me
my wings fold against my side as I dive
I open my beak
to snatch up my prey

Heron bird
The water quivers
my beak splashes in
my beak splashes out
a shiny silver fish
wriggling in my mouth

Modern Bird
They say my ancestors lived long ago
with scaly skin
and dangerous teeth
then why do I
have soft feathers
and a beak?

Archaeopteryx
I wonder what my future self is
will I still have teeth
the strong feet
will everything change?
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Post  black-wolf-jet on Tue Sep 29, 2009 10:54 am

Great poetry my friend. ^^ I always have an obsession with making my poems rhyme for some reason. >.<
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Post  Packa Packa on Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:48 pm

Thanks Jet! O.o I can't make poems rhyme. It is my weakness. I have lots more except I am going to type them later Too many and I lost the paper. Thanks again! I will try to make poems rhyme from now on but, like I said, it is my only weakness.
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